Stefanie and the Metalloids

So I have a love-hate relationship with Steven Universe. I like a lot of the characters and a lot of the show’s concepts but the constant refusal to just tell the story is inherently frustrating. I could go into all the things about the show that frustrate me but it’s a long list. So I was talking to a friend and got the idea. Why not make a better version of Steven Universe? Take the concept and fix all the problems I have with it. 

In a distant cyberpunk universe, the human race has colonized multiple planets. They end up at war with a race of aliens called the metalloids. The war wages on for years and amidst it a group of metalloids rebel against their leaders and a Copper soldier kills leader Platinum. Copper and his companions retreat to earth 5. At some point he’s separated from his friends and damaged. A human woman named Georgia repairs him and he stays with her in hiding. They fall in love and conceive a daughter named Stefanie. Shortly after Stefanie is born though Copper realizes that while she is half metalloid she lacks a core (which is what allows metalloids to move and use their powers) Without a core she wouldn’t live very long. He sacrifices himself by giving his core to his daughter to save her. Stefanie grows up with her mom but around 14 or 15 her dad’s old friends come to find her and run off with her on a search for a super weapon that her father had hidden away years ago. They travel the worlds together with Georgia chasing after them trying to get her daughter back. Meanwhile bounty hunters are sent after them on a mission to hunt down and retrieve Copper’s old core to gain the information contained inside.